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| Gilly Bean2 2008-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a nicely written short story, but I have one question: What is Madeleine so guilty about? Her friend is obviously fine, so where is her guilt directed? Her memory is obviously affected, as well, so it is frustrating that her friend is so inconsiderate about it all. I'm pretty sure that I would fee like the luckiest person in the world if I escaped a bad car wreck with nothing but a minor injury to my wrist, and I would feel guilty about that if my friend was so badly injured. Anyway, very nice story--a nice little slice of life piece. Cheers! Gillian |
| AyumiYuy 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseIt's kind of a new take on "It’s living with what you’ve done that hurts the most." Her friend made me so mad! Good job. =) |
| Secret Heart01 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseAw ... so melancholic! Now I feel sad. Now I need to go read a fluffy fic to cheer self up. Hahaha have a good weekend :) |
| Klianie Janiko 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abusehaha the doctor's conversation was funny. |
| Lily Llynn 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseAH! The writing is spectacular (as usual), but I hate her best friend (Taryn)!! Geeze! It might've been her fault but honestly, she doesn't need to be so callous. RAWR. Sorry, it was just really.. ugh. XD But it's good, it really is. You do feel sympathy for Mads. (: |
| SimplySweetnSour 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseoh no! don't tell me you've started writing a whole bunch of angst stories again! i liked catch you! XD |
| luv me like no other 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abusewow, this is a good piece. i liked the overall theme of it. |