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| InLoveWithAFool 2008-06-30 ch 2,  | abusei've only read the prologue and chapter 2 of your story 'The Billionaire Theif' and i already love it! the idea is orginal, there's detail, and it's going to be a romance. i can't wait to see how the rest unfolds. oh, and i love this sentence: I stood there, like a dead carrot, in disbelief. :] good work! |
| misery sister 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseVery good beginning. It grabs your attention. I see why this story has over 10,0 hits. :) |
| Mend 2008-01-24 ch 34, | abuseGA! I LOVED IT! I'm so proud of myself for reading to the very end... I think i'm cryin'... |
| SaiMero 2008-01-22 ch 27, anon. | abusehey I love your story! I think Sung Hyun and Yuna should stay together They're such a cute couple |
| ophelia 2007-12-31 ch 10, anon. | abuseur story is kinda all over the place...maybe you should have someone read and edit before you post...you say things dat don't make sense..like the plane is going down and the first thing she does is grab her luggage??..that makes no sense..but if you were too rewrite this and develop the characters and scenes more then it would be a cool story.. |
| Val Skauf 2007-12-28 ch 34, | abusereally, really, really fantastic! it did remind me of the princess diaries a little at the start, though. but i loved it anyway! |
| Untamed Wind 2007-12-17 ch 4, | abusei love it! |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abuseUhm... that was pretty confusing. Maybe you could organize it better? It was interesting though :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI love this prologue, it kinda dives into the story and tells you a lot but not at the same time. Awesome job, I can't wait to read more :) |
| Jayjack 2007-12-04 ch 33, | abuse'whoosh' haha. that's great. :'D happy tears. *sighs* to the last chapter. :( |
| Jayjack 2007-12-03 ch 20, | abusewow. i seriously would slap that lady. Yuna's mom. i don't care how rude it is but seriously she's horrible! who does that to their child?!?! making them marrying one guy and just because he's not wealthy enough marry a different guy of course Yuna isn't going to agree to this and she will refuse to sign i mean right? any civilized person would do that right? the non-greedy type anyway. |
| Jayjack 2007-12-02 ch 8, | abusewhat a **. why wouldn't she believe her that is totally ** but she'll get over it. haha. she broke one of his bones. ehehe |
| Jayjack 2007-12-02 ch 6, | abusewhat a dick. wow. that's low even for a thief. |
| Jayjack 2007-12-01 ch 4, | abusewow. |
| Jayjack 2007-12-01 ch 3, | abuseahh! thief? wow i really love this story so far it's amazing. hmm. |