Reviews for Sapphires and Emeralds

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believeitornot,sharonreads. 2008-10-06 ch 8, anon.	abuseARGH. omg. i am SO jealous of you.
believeitornot,sharonreads. 2008-10-06 ch 7, anon.	abuseomgomgomg! [:) god. love this.
loveSZbrownie 2008-10-05 ch 26,	abuseohhmysugarhoneyicetea...that took like forever for me to finish! WEll first of all i have to commend you, because although it had its cliche aspects, i definitely did not think, in the beginning, that Em would end up with Aaron. It was quite clever how you mentioned that it was a black haired guy, but there were more than one black haired guys. Kept me guessing all until i finally figured it out that flame was Aaron. Hmm a point to mention: One of the only things that annoyed me about Em was how fragile she was. She seemed to be crying a lot in this story. I guess it came along with the character and because of what happened in the past, but i still found myself a little annoyed. Although, in one of the earlier chapters, the first emotional scene (i think it was between Em and Will) made me cry so much becasue of how emotional it was and only good writers are able to draw me in like that. Congratulations on finishing this story, i know so many people who start a good story, but never have the motivation to finish it. Anyway just wanted to say that this was a very worthwhile read, even though it took me so damn long to finish it. (sorry for the long review)
believeitornot,sharonreads. 2008-10-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseDAMN! (:
believeitornot,sharonreads. 2008-10-04 ch 2, anon.	abuse(: LOL was laughing so loud.
believeitornot,sharonreads. 2008-10-04 ch 1, anon.	abusei got this rec fro my sister, and it is really good. (: i admire you. my story sucks. \:
euroweasley 2008-10-04 ch 26, anon.	abuseWill there be a sequel? Pretty please?
master.of.all.evil 2008-10-04 ch 1,	abusei loved it!simply loved it! i feel like crying XD i loved this story!
brittle hearts 2008-10-03 ch 1,	abuseA very nice and flowing introduction. You've captured my attention, and I'll be reading on.
iRomance 2008-10-01 ch 19,	abuseAHA! I was right...sort of. I kind thought it was one of the Spark brothers. Though, I must admit, I was kind of hoping for it to be Alex. I do like the Aaron/Em pairing MUCH more.
iRomance 2008-09-30 ch 15,	abuseoh, bring on the drama. I can't wait. EEKS. Now, I feel as if Alex who is "Flame". I don't know why.. I'm just guessing that on a whim. And basic general knowledge where a guy you talk to on a desk, or anything that makes you question who it is, is probably someone you least expects. So I think its one of the Sparks brothers. I don't think its Will. It cannot be Tristan. :S AHH. I want to know who Flame is!
iRomance 2008-09-30 ch 14,	abuseI don't understand Tristan. I mean I do, but not that well. He confuses me. The flings/ "romances" he had with the other two girls (more?) makes me wonder if he actually does love Emme. I mean, It seems like he does, but...He's a character that I'm not sure about what his intentions are. I feel like he's perfect and all for Emme but the whole pregnant Rose thing threw me off. I guess I'm asking if he's really in love with Emme. I don't know if a lot of people said this but I will. I don't think I'm really for Emme and Tristan getting together. I kinda like the Aaron/ Emme pairing more. But even more than that I like Emme/ Flame pairing. I know this stories done, but I'm looking forward to Flame being revealed. I kinda really want it to be Aaron. At first I thought it was Will. he he. By the way, You're an amazing author!
iRomance 2008-09-29 ch 3,	abuseOh, wow. You got me. I was totally thinking Benji was Emmeline's brother. Woah. That was nice!
ryse 2008-09-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseQuite the story, and I liked it for so many reasons. I liked it first, because Emmeline did not fall in love with her 'true' love first, in the actual story and not in the past. It makes it seem more realistic and a more of story I would actually like. In the first couple of chapters, I have to admit, I felt it wasn't quite right for Emmeline to be with Tristan. I mean hey, at first i was like "Cool." But then, I just didn't like them together. They had no chemistry, and you did a great job in showing the lack of chemistry. So, I was pretty happy when they broke up. And then, I don't know. Before there was any sign that Aaron like Emmeline, I felt that maybe, just maybe, the fairytale was for Emmeline and Aaron. But that hope was soon crushed when you wrote on your Author note: "It was just a peck, don’t get your hopes up. And no, Aaron does not like Emee." But then, I was thinking - who was Flame anyway? I used the clues carefully, he obviously knew her - because if he didn't, no offense, but what sort of awkward story would that be? You're suddenly making up a whole new character, and seriously, I do like cliches where the girl falls in love with a significant character (e.g. the Pride members). I cut out Will, because that would be even more awkward than her and some random guy. I considered Benji for a while, because you know how he had red hair and thus, red = flame? But soon, I just didn't want her with Benji, as they became more platonic friends, and honestly? Her knight in shining armor had DARK hair, not red. So that left Tristan and Aaron. So I considered it. In fact,the very first person who popped into my head WAS Tristan. But as their relationship dulled to something more platonic, that only left Aaron, who I honestly wanted her to be with. More chemistry. So, to be truthful, I honestly wasn't surprised when Flame turned out to be Aaron. In fact, I was happy :) - Now I remember. When he wrote on the desk I've been with her three (or was it four?) years and something about satiating their hormones or whatever, I was like: Oh my god, this really is Aaron! Unless its something random dude. (Haha.) All in all, it was a great story and I thoroughly enjoyed it :P.
layabonifacio 2008-09-27 ch 26, anon.	abuseHey. This story was rec'ed to me by one of my LJ friends. This is fantastic, the way they handled things maturely. It was wonderful to see Em grow up and break out of her shell. To see the sibling rivalries fixed. To see them all grow up. I think the issue of teenage pregnancy is something really, really deep, and to have teenagers handle it in such a mature way was a break into all the cliches about temper-tantrums and such. The portrayal of the Pride and the group was also, though seemingly cliche at first, wasn't really. There were undercurrents and issues that was dealt with in a wonderful way. The progression of the story was great. It wasn't hurried up or too slow. The sarcasm and biting wit was also great. And I have to say that I knew Flame was Aaron way before Em knew. Haha. It was the way he wrote, and the way he described himself. Anyway, too long-winded review. Sometimes, it is great to wish that in real life, through all these complicated scenarios, people have the sense to deal with things maturely like these people did. You write really, really good. Thank you for sharing this story with us :) --april (layabonifacio at livejournal dot com)

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