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| Lilly Wattenberg 2007-10-12 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it. i was a little confused so i think i'll reread it but otherwise not a bad start. Are you going on or is this just a one shot? |
| under the influence 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseaw |
| raggon 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseExcellent descriptions - you're fantastic at writing. Left me with a kind of empty, dismal feeling, which is what I think you wanted so: great job! |