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| creepy kiss on tuesday 2007-10-22 ch 1,  | abusei love this. very much. i feel this constantly. thing is i've become so used to being supressed sometimes im not even sure what it is i want to say that they're not letting me. they being the way things are in general. i love the imagery of the poem. it's the kind of imagery that should be cliche, but you manipulated it in a way that pulls the whole thing off. i actually imagined chewing on glass *not something i recommend*. well now im done rambling, good day to you fine sir. or madame. or it-thing. |
| Eagle Seance 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked the singing blades simile. Liked this reading this. |