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rebeldork 2008-08-30 . chapter 1
...I agree.

I was involved in an armed robbery at the Quiznos where I work, and I have to say, when a gun was pointed at my face, I didn't see my life flashing. I just thought, I have to obey, I have to do whatever the hell they want, I want to live.

Have you ever experienced any sort of traumatic/near-death/startling experience, the kind this story is about? Just wondering, because I think you portray it well.
xfail 2007-10-12 . chapter 1
I really like how original the ideas in this are. I've never considered that before.
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