Reviews for An Honoured Coward

heart shaped box x3 2008-08-27 ch 1,	abuseIt was a nice poem. I felt that the flow of it was a bit chunky, but that's probably because of the period at the end of every line. Not every line needs a period like: "I've want for this medal to shine proudly for so long. But all it does is blink dully at me." You could use a comma at the end of the first line instead of a period. I feel that you could have made it a bit longer, to put in some more detail, but I still like the poem. Good work. -Drea {heart shaped box}
Caecilia 2008-08-27 ch 1,	abuseWow. Angtsy for sure. The only thing I really have to say, is that you don't need to end the sentences with periods. I think in some spots it would be better to put commas instead. like- [The certificate looks at me in disappointment./ It makes me feel ashamed and unworthy.] I think after 'disappointment' a comma would be better. But that's just me. Nice writing Evei. ~Caecilia, down at the Roadhouse
xbluxmoonx 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseaw. that's sad. but very nice poem.
chrismd0 2007-10-17 ch 1, anon.	abusegood poem, good perspective, abit disheartening but W/E. :)