Great story.

Twilight Starr

I like it. I've never read anything quite like this, so definitely points for originality. Even though the topic is common, you show it in a very unique way. It's very poetic, I like the variation in the language you use and the juxtaposition of concepts. You've got talent, keep writing! I've added you to author alerts.

My favorite season. Lovely, lovely as always. And this, the best line: "You breathe silently," the seasons whisper. Spring and Summer play like children, trading a love that never fades; Winter tosses her porcelain hair, gazes into a pool of ice, admires her own shimmering deportment. "... While Autumn gasps and struggles, too warm to die, too cold to blossom, a victim to her own strangulation."

It's been such a strange and fickle autumn though, like it can't decide whether it wants to remain summer or not so it just teeters on the edge. We've only had a handful of days that have truly felt like fall so far. :(

I hear it's supposed to be a very mild winter though.

i love the descriptions they really give you an entire story.

"You breathe silently," the seasons whisper is a great line by the way.