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| Lily Llynn 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseCute, well-written albeit a bit short, and fluffy/cliche. All things I love. My only (criticism?) was that I thought mute people went to other schools than from non-mute people. Oh well. Still adore, and I adore xoxluurve for adding it to our c2 and you for writing it of course. (: |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was cute :D -Aria |
| x3life 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseaw this was so cute! =) |
| d666lisa 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseBEAUTIFUL :-D |
| Jevanminx 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI loved that its different to write about a mute and its interesting to think how someones life would be. And also a lovely plot line. It was so cute. JM |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abusethat was really good! i understood the voice part! will u read one of my stories. i think i have a oneshot, but mostly i write poetry. i have like, 3 poems i still have to write. any who, good story! |
| OctoberSkies 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abusethat was a really cool idea actually...Outstanding! |
| starlit x sky 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was so cute!! |
| Abigail Cathleen 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abusenyah, i absolutely loved it, very sweet. - pretty yuina |
| Pereo Angelus 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good, way different from normal fluff. this could turn into a really good story if you continued, or it could make a really nice series of one shots. very nice job. |
| YellowCanary 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading that, very sweet and romantic. I love it! |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseCute! Is this a oneshot? Yeah... It is... It's cute though! |
| Diisaster 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abusePLEASE UPDATE? I love yoou D: Omg. It's so adorable. And and and. And... Yeah... |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseAw...that is beautiful d:) And the idea is a very romantic one. d:) Great job! |