This is definately my favourite, because it's so damn true. I love the line "Who is she? Looks like a prisoner to me." I can really relate. It really shows what every teenager is thinking, giving words to what i could only sum up in one finger. (If you know what i mean).
i know the feeling. I just wanted to let you know that in one of the lines you wrote "Lups and downs" instead of "ups and downs" It's no big deal, great song/poem
The cry of teenagers everywhere (myself included). If only that anthem could be spread across the news.
I'd love to hear this in the form of a song. I'm sure if you did, it'd touch a lot of people. I've only seen maybe 1 or 2 poems and hints similar, but in a song? Nice. Good job!!
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