Reviews for Oblivion Admirance 080207

santiforthevenom.
2007-10-17
ch 1,

abusei quite liked this, although i felt the parts about "wave and walk away", "retain your gift" and "serenity" were trite, and felt like filler.

and if you choose the have the first part of your song rhyming, then the second part should somewhat as well, it felt a little unbalanced.

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