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| FallenPhoenix721 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, while reading this, while short it sums up a lot of what is going on with me. I enjoyed reading this. |
| Dr. Dreyyy 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseU suck just giv up riting FOREVAR losar!! |
| Xalga 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseHello, tonight is part of my lively hood. I'm cynical, and I'd like to help with your poem. The words, twisted, upbeat, bounce, are very good words, useful and you applied them well. I'd just like to say that your over all wording, is the same as saying, "Hey this is that. Also that thing is this too". It is a bit simple, other than that. Good job and keep writing. The only way to become as good as you can be. |