rawr. awesomeness. enough said. =]

Dude, i have been away for far too long. you know, I keep telling myself I'll kepp up with this, yet everytime I end up on unintentional and indefinite hiatuses. Ugh.

Anyway. Can you send me the formatted version? Right now I feel like there's not much flow, but I think that's probably just a problem with the formatting or lack thereof.

The bro(falling)ken is clever.

Just as a personaly preference, I think here and there you could use with at least a few more line breaks. Although keeping it all in one sets a nice flow, there is a certain lacking in finality when some periods run stright into a new line. But like I said, that's just my personal preference, so it has little credibility.

Beyond that, smiles from me;

Very emotive, Carrie! I know what you mean about formatting - it peeves me that you can't use tab etc, cos I like to play with my layout too! Does the space bar do anything? Anyway, you evoked a wonderful sense of isolation with your word choice. Well done!

(Inspiration can strike in the strangest of places, can't it?)

Lexie

history class? well inspiration comes up in unlikely places! hehe. it has a layout? wow that's interesting!
=summerdazed=