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| SparklingStar25 2008-04-10 ch 3,  | abuseAWW...SO CUTE! |
| Faithfully Yours 2008-03-30 ch 3, | abuseO! That was adorable! Very creative too. I rather wish it wasn't the end though... =( |
| Val Skauf 2007-12-30 ch 3, | abuseAW! really sweet! great job! |
| dOrKy-GuRl03 2007-11-08 ch 3, | abusethat was very interesting stories..i like it...can't believe that its finish already...its very good..i wish that its can be more..but its good enough...bye..bye... |
| RoseLife 2007-10-26 ch 3, | abuseOMg! so cute! haha u should think about doing a sequel XD but i loved it, awsome job! ~RL~ |
| Joseph-Dreamer 2007-10-21 ch 3, | abuseReally good story! You're a talented writer, wiht some good ideas. |
| Pop the Bubble 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseomgosh! i didn't realise this was a rewrite! hahahaha oops i thought it was a bit different to before :P good work =D bubble xx |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-10-19 ch 3, | abuseThis chapter contained way more detail than the first one (I'm referring to the first version of this chapter)! And it was very good! Well done! |
| Pinkamoo 2007-10-18 ch 3, | abuseAw! Even more kisses, and a number. I only have one non-related guy's number, when I messaged him he thought I was one of his friends. Whom I happened to have a crush on, lol. Love the chapter. Good job! |
| Pinkamoo 2007-10-18 ch 2, | abuseKisses :) Cute. update so-YOU HAVE! I'm sorry for taking a while to read it :p |
| madeyes61 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuseYou have started a great story so far. Where will it go? I guess the only way I'll be able to know is when you write some more. So please update as soon as you have time. Thanks! |
| Among-the-Vampires 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuseVery good. I liked it alot. It was short and sweet. But i think if you wanted to you vould tunr it into a longer story, write about what happens once she gets back to her home towm and she calls Jared. write about the relationship. i think it would be a good story. and you defantly wrote the three chapters very well. a few gramamar mistakes here and there. but it happens. Keep up the good writing. |
| kurstin.burstin 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuseCliffhanger much? Haha. I like it a lot. Can't wait for another update. |
| CattyCat 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuseVery nice. *applause* |
| daisy dreams. 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuseah so cute, really good ending... great writing style, i loved it! - pretty yuina |