Reviews for I Woke Up Cold - FictionPress.com

emily shambles 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abusethis is so atmospheric, and i like the odd rhyming pattern. "we all spin faster" -such a beautiful line.
DorkMaster 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abuseGood use of imagery. The rhyme scheme switched, which threw me off for a moment, but it didn't disturb the flow... which I find amazing.
kelsi bones 2007-11-14 ch 1,	abuseYou sure like your rhyming, haha. It works well for you, but I'd love read something written by you in free verse. Even if you don't post it, experiment with it. It's... freeing =] I really like the last line of this piece. Pretty imagery. k.X
DiaRose 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuseVery unique. I really like this. Love, ~Dia
rinse and repeat 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuseI'm not a huge fan of rhymes, but I like this. You conveyed emotions without actually saying them. The only thing is that 'answer' didn't seem to fit. Also, I think I like the other title more - 'I Woke Up Cold" - it's gives more of a statement rather than just 'Afraid', which is common. I'd love it if you took a look at some of my work as well, I suggest my snapshots.