|Reviews for Return to my past|
| Twilight Starr 10/22/07 . chapter 1
| AuraBorealis 10/19/07 . chapter 1
good work. keep on writing
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 10/15/07 . chapter 1
This is really good! I'm so adding this to favs!
| Almost-human 10/15/07 . chapter 1
That was awsome! I realy felt it in here(points to mental heart).
| Eagle Seance 10/13/07 . chapter 1
Almost like a song, very beautifully written.
| An Inside Joke 10/13/07 . chapter 1
I like the blend of general philosophising and direct address to the persona's lover. Good rhythm, but it didn't thematically feel like much more than a typical break-up poem.