Lovely song.

Twilight Starr

good work. keep on writing

This is really good! I'm so adding this to favs!

Kristie Marie

That was awsome! I realy felt it in here(points to mental heart).

Almost like a song, very beautifully written.

I like the blend of general philosophising and direct address to the persona's lover. Good rhythm, but it didn't thematically feel like much more than a typical break-up poem.