I really enjoyed this.
I noticed though that you begin almost every sentence with the subject, give them a verb to do, and maybe a direct object for the first (I don't know how long) of the poem. Eventually you stop doing that completely though and used more complicated sentences. I think if you either continued that until the last sentence or two, it would give it a simple quality, like childhood memories. Or you could try to change things up for the whole thing and make it sound more sophisticated and fluid. Or neither, whatever you want.
This has got to be one of the most confusing reviews I've left, sorry. My brains a bit frazzled.