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Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-01-26 ch 15,	abuseis it wrong that i want to bash nate's brains in? cuz if it is, than awesome...and i will most DEFINATELY be looking for it
Sweetly Sarcastic 2008-01-26 ch 15,	abuseeh, i sort of don't completely hate him, i guess. it's a good ending- it's not completely depressing, but not too happy and cliche either. i look forward to the sequel!
cyanidecandy 2008-01-18 ch 14,	abusethis chapter has such a big time lapse . suddenly they were supposed to be getting married and now she's moving away because of eve and nates affair ? =S a bit confusing. i was hoping u'd focus a bit more on nates and eves relationship. but the short three to four chapter story thing sounds interesting and hopefully u'll go on with that ! :)
euphorictragedy 2008-01-18 ch 14,	abuseHa! Serves him right, the bastard. Yeah, that's pretty much all I have to say.
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-01-18 ch 14,	abuseoh yes, i wanna read that, could you possibly send me a PM when you do? because i'll be looking forward to it HOLY ! WHAT THE HELL IS HIS PROBLEM?!?!?! I KNEW I NEVER LIKED HIM! he's scum. he should've never asked her to marry him in the first place! what the hell?! i wanna smack him no one should EVER have to go through what he put olivia through i don't like him..nope. i hope he gets hurt where the sun don't shine so he can reproduce no more..hell, so he can't even get it up no more. yup, i like that plan i wish i could be the one to do it to him too ...jeez, i'm so violent...but he deserves it...right along with every other tard that does that to girls...jerks
Sweetly Sarcastic 2008-01-18 ch 14,	abusewhat a jerk- men should not 1) have affairs 2) break up with their pregnant girlfriends and 3) think about other women before proposing. nate needs to just die... slowly and painfully. but yes, i would definitely read a sequel-ish thing! and please update soon! although i am kind of sad that this is the penultimate chapter.
Sweetly Sarcastic 2008-01-11 ch 13,	abuseno no no... bad things are happening in this chapter; natalie's trusting tom, olivia is being stalked, and nate is talking to eve again. erg. please update soon though!
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-01-10 ch 13,	abuseoh my gosh! he can't! ah! its insaneness!! (haha, that's actually a word!) he can't do that to her! its cruel!
euphorictragedy 2008-01-10 ch 13,	abuseNo! Ugh, he disgusts me, seriously. He doesn't deserve someone as great as Olivia. She should leave him if he's going to be like this.
euphorictragedy 2008-01-10 ch 12,	abuseSo he hasn't stopped sleeping with her or what? Man, what a pig.
euphorictragedy 2008-01-10 ch 11,	abuseHa! He said they promised to be honest with each other. Typical guy, I swear. Being honest means having no secrets with your girlfriend like how he slept with a woman besides her. Yeah, small detail right? Ugh, **.
euphorictragedy 2008-01-10 ch 10,	abuseOh, poor naive little Eve. Ha! That rhymes! But anyway, that was stupid of her to think that a guy in a relationship would just drop everything and be with her. And then, stupid Nate for sleeping with her and abandoning his girlfriend for awhile like that. Ugh, men are pigs... but so are the women that sleep with them even when they are in a relationship. I really like this story so far. The grammar is off sometimes, though, but it's still good.
18crazybanana 2008-01-09 ch 12,	abuseAmazing, amazing, amazing! I would love to see Natalie and Chase get together... That would be real sweet. I love this chapter, and Nate and Olivia are adorable. Olivia's fam is horrid, but I guess you meant to make them that way. I hoep we get to see more of Eve in the future though! I've read your message on your blog, do not worry, us fans will be there, no matter what you read.
xfrozenwindx 2008-01-07 ch 12,	abuseI love this. ;) Please update.
18crazybanana 2008-01-04 ch 11,	abuseAnother wonderful chapter! Awkward encounter between Olivia and Eve ... Hm, I wonder who those creepy calls are coming from! I loved the interaction between Chase and Natalie ... it's so fun to read about them. Update as soon as possible :)

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