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| simpleplan13 2008-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseshort, but to the point and what an excellent point it is... awesome job |
| Fan Fan 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abusehaha, exotic :) |
| kloun mannequin 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh, I like that, it's so amazing, I understand what you mean and it's a powerful and true feeling in the poem. |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseSadly, it;'s true. You've portrayed a scary and real truth in this haiku. Mankind is creating it's own dystopia, sooner or later. Great haiku...*faves* -C.N |
| the face in the window 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseHow true and it's a shame really. A beautiful haiku. You have so much skill to put together so little words and create a masterpiece. Rowan. |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseTrue, honest, specific and visual. Very encompassing and thought provoking haiku. Well written. |
| Kendall Quinn 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseWow. This may be the most profound haiku I've ever read. It's amazing what a powerful statement can be made with so few words. One thing I'm curious about, though... What's the significance of the bolded and italicised letters? Excellent, excellent work. It's brilliant. Blessings, KQ |
| painting andromeda 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseYou've portrayed a haunting truth. This poem is flawless in all aspects, yet it scares me. Mankind is destroying itself. Keep up the good work. Stay well, Stephen |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseYour work is always well thought out, but I can't seem to understnad why the O and the M were bolded.? Or was there no meaning behind it. |
| lost for words 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseSad, but so true. We just keep spoiling the planet... Great haiku. |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI love the message and the fact that it's so well wrapped in a haiku. Very clever. |
| painted.music 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa *sigh* This left me sort of depressed if I must put a word to it... it's so pathetically right that we're destroying how world and home - the only place we have really. Sorry, I'm in a bit of a mood like that. *shrug* Anyway, great hiaku -- really makes you think. *shakes head and sighs* ~painted.music |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseew we're ruining the world. run to the moon! fast! |