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Reviews For: Death's Scythe

Morte d'Amour
2007-10-27
ch 1,
abuseWonderful! The word choice and use of vocabulary is magnificent. Reading this nearly renders me speechless. :)

It's hard to pick out my favorite lines, so I don't really have any; however, the last line I will say is beautifully written, especially the first part of it. Speaking of which, I enjoyed your repeated use of the ellipsis.

Great job!
amiash
2007-10-15
ch 1, anon.
abusethe saddest creation i've ever read,
it talks about serious problems, suicides, typical teenage boredom. hm...
Chidori Nadare
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseI really like your haibuns...they always make me feel like i'm reading a story from a myth or something. I love the haiku:

'Dual natured base
Omega's counterpart: shade
Sonorous art: style'

That's perfect and amazing...Great job once again.

-C.N
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