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| Morte d'Amour 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! The word choice and use of vocabulary is magnificent. Reading this nearly renders me speechless. :) It's hard to pick out my favorite lines, so I don't really have any; however, the last line I will say is beautifully written, especially the first part of it. Speaking of which, I enjoyed your repeated use of the ellipsis. Great job! |
| amiash 2007-10-15 ch 1, anon. | abusethe saddest creation i've ever read, it talks about serious problems, suicides, typical teenage boredom. hm... |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like your haibuns...they always make me feel like i'm reading a story from a myth or something. I love the haiku: 'Dual natured base Omega's counterpart: shade Sonorous art: style' That's perfect and amazing...Great job once again. -C.N |