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| Basara 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abusea feel so unreal purity of the circle... nice... |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI like the words used in this haiku, they all (twilight, goddess, life, death .ect) give an element of fantasy or otherworldly feel. The use of the word feather was perfect, as it give it a heavenly kind of feel. I love the imagery and the way you used such delicate words to push a strong message across. Very well crafted haiku. |
| burning in effigy 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseohh.. that was interesting especially the last line great job! |