 Dale Christopher 2007-10-14 . chapter 1I like the words used in this haiku, they all (twilight, goddess, life, death .ect) give an element of fantasy or otherworldly feel. The use of the word feather was perfect, as it give it a heavenly kind of feel. I love the imagery and the way you used such delicate words to push a strong message across. Very well crafted haiku. |