Reviews for Always On My Mind

xashesx
2007-10-17
ch 1,

abuseYou write really well. There was a vivid use of adjectives, it all made sense, there was a smooth transition, and I loved the story. Michael's scattered, unsure thoughts over the girl he loves is touching and the fact the reader is left to guess why he lost her for two and a half years makes this piece all the more alluring.
*bravo*

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