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| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseWoah dude, well-put. I don't have much to say. But... wow, that was some serious **. Good job. -STIX- |
| Jordan Storm 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuse**whistle** short, sweet, and powerful, it's great stuff, keep it up! |
| Dexterity 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseWhat can I say? This is a great description of a drug! But then, maybe your poem is metaphoric and I've only scratched the surface. Oh well, with my feeble knowledge, I still think it is great. Hope you'll write more! If you have the time, check out my story "Beyond the Horizon" and give me a bit of feedback since I'm new to fictionpress and don't really know what I'm doing, haha. It's only if you have time though. I understand if you don't. Anyway, keep writing! Wish you good luck in the future! |
| multiples of six 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is powerful. I'm not 100% sure how to interpret it, but I guess there's several interpretations. It's enigmatic. I like it. =) |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |