I totally understood that, you didn't need to explain. :)

This is a beautiful poem, I love the happy ending. I've been working at putting those in my poetry. :)

I had hoped that someone would save her, and I was really happy when you put the boy in. It was really cool to me.

Just something I have to say - "Mini" in the line "My mini killing tool" stands out to me. Like, it sounds cute at first, which bothered me, but the more I think it, the more the words turn darker. I dunno. XD

I really like your poetry, by the way. :)

I loved this as well. You really are an awesome poet. Your rhyming is so sweet. As I said before, not usually a fan of poetry but ya kinda make it work, ya know? I love this and it was so sad. In the beginning, I was just like... totally sad about how it was going. I felt so sorry for the girl because sometimes I feel how she seems to be feeling, at least I think but not to that extent... And I was really happy in the end when he saves her and says that he loves her and all. It made me smile. I love happy endings. The world just sees too little of them. Anyways, great job, keep up the amazing work. I'm off to read ya next poem. Much love, dear. Cassandra.

i liked this one better *adds to faves* hehe brilliant job, oh yeah i was reading your thing me likie three days grace too, though i don't know too many people who like A.F.I. anymore.

hm... not bad... but, why is this on the haiku section?

nice...