That was so cute.

Sigh. Just freaking sigh. So beautiful.

So Russian beautiful. Love it.

Aw that was really sweet and cute! Great job!

cute story ! i kind of expected the two of them to end together but i was suprised how it happened!

That was such a cute story, I loved it.

Haha. Very predictable. You can't have a sexy Russian without making him important. But I loved it so much. I don't know what it was, exactly, about this. Very good imagery, I think, is part of it. I don't know quite what you did, but I could just visualize everything very well. I really liked this. They're just so cute, you know? Of course you know. You wrote it. Well. Good job, then, I guess.

awesome story!

i love all your stories. its amazing how you flesh the characters out and all your love scenes are just emotional. love your stlye. and maybe you can write from max's point of view? he's just so cute!

Aw, this is really cute. Really different from Calling but in a good way. It ended so cutely. :)

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i loved this!! =D
Max is so cute =)

you should do a sequel, this is just to good to end with just one story =D

OMG this is made of win! I love it very muchly, thankyou for posting it!

Aww. So lovely. One of the best oneshots ever. Loved it.

Amazing one-shot. I really like all your stories and I'm hoping to read all of your stories later =)

Well done. :D

I know how difficult it is to write a one shot that actually reads and feels like a finished story -- I've tried it, though I've never found the courage to post one.

But I do think you've done a great job with this one, provided a very distinct beginning, middle and end and it had a satisfying conclusion.

I loved your dialogue and the characterizations, they were constant throughout the story. Great work, really. Keep writing.

-Bleep

I loved it! I liked the twist and the happy ending was beautiful.

Congrats! ^_^

~Teodora

I liked this oneshot. Especially the different way that Ben and Max met and eventually got together. Very cute. :)