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| Blei 2008-05-26 ch 1,  | abuseoh i loved this!! =D Max is so cute =) you should do a sequel, this is just to good to end with just one story =D |
| Christina 2008-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG this is made of win! I love it very muchly, thankyou for posting it! |
| Kitsune Luvr 2008-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww. So lovely. One of the best oneshots ever. Loved it. |
| Mistress of Apple Pie 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseAmazing one-shot. I really like all your stories and I'm hoping to read all of your stories later =) Well done. :D |
| bleepbloopbanana 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI know how difficult it is to write a one shot that actually reads and feels like a finished story -- I've tried it, though I've never found the courage to post one. But I do think you've done a great job with this one, provided a very distinct beginning, middle and end and it had a satisfying conclusion. I loved your dialogue and the characterizations, they were constant throughout the story. Great work, really. Keep writing. -Bleep |
| TeodoraKagome 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! I liked the twist and the happy ending was beautiful. Congrats! ^_^ ~Teodora |
| nonaccount 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseI liked this oneshot. Especially the different way that Ben and Max met and eventually got together. Very cute. :) |
| ddz008 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat one-shot! :) It was lovely, I'm glad that at the end they found happiness together. |
| Sazuki 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuse"You're the meaning in my life. You're my inspiration." I quoth that song for 2 reasons: 1 - It kinda came to my head when Ben sees the pic Max made of him... 2 - Every time I read one of your stories, I need to go write something. Gah! And whether I read something written by you irl or on teh web (which I won't get to read irl anymore wah) it still deserves a review! :) - I'm glad the move to England is going well, mate. Is it true that teh Internet is better/faster than here? Hm? |
| Rice-Ball247 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abusegosh, i rarely review oneshots, tbh, unless they're really awesome. and this defeats awesome hands down. there's just an unspoken understanding about it and 'yeah' to it. Can't describe it though. I love your work/writing btw. |
| silently.waiting.foh.u 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abusetotally awesome one shot.. soo cute =) |
| amerez 2007-10-14 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was adorable! Thanks. |
| Anego 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseSigh! So wonderful! It's one of those stories that you kinda think you know what's gonna happen but you wanna read it anyway because its just so wonderfully heartwarming. I loved it! I'm glad you're getting situated in England and that you're writing again! I always really really love your stories! I can't wait for more! Best wishes -Anego |
| Vera Dicere 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseaw. this is really cute. i love me some fluff. i have to admit i kind of saw the whole ben/maxy 'we-meet-again' blind date thing coming, but i think it worked out pretty well. i'm glad they both ended up happy and they're really cute together. ^^ |
| Altlover172 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like it! It's cute. |