Nice story. I wish the characters had been older though, it would have added this extra level of maturity to the story.

Anyhoo, great work :)

aww such a sweet story :)

I definitely liked this. Wicked cute :D

Have a Happy New Year!

~Mia

aw this was really cutee!! haha. i really like how he explained the whole locker note thingy.. =)

How to Write a Totally Awesome Story That Is Not a Bunch of Crap. (:
I love this. It's spiffy writing and spiffy characters. (: Why *wouldn't* I add it to my c2? (:

aw...he liked her for all those years

veddy cute...written nicely i must say though you said it wasn't edited...lol no, consider yourself UNjudged lol

--MizSphinx

the story was cute, the ending was the best though, with the bartering.

I loved this. It was most definately not crap. I may however be partial because I was a guardie myself and for another reason that I'm not inclined to explain. This was really good though.
-Insane

omg.
oh so very cute. *sigh*
and great ending, by the way (:

Well...

I don't know what your problem is with this, but I liked it. A lot.

IA

I really like this :D

Cute! A bit lengthy, this may have done better divided into two, but I've read longer, so it wasn't too bad. I like how you kept the focus on James and Tia, without delving too much into other couples; the 'bartering' at the end was hilarous. But the locker thing was just plain cruel and mean!

KEEP IT UP!