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steph 2008-06-16 ch 6, anon.	abusegreat story!! Hope you update soon!
naokoangel01 2008-05-13 ch 7,	abuseThe squel to one of my favorit stories Please writ more on it I would love to see how it will trurn out :D
Just Breathing 2008-05-12 ch 7,	abuseI am completely in love with these series and I must say, I'm kind of upset that Soulless has been put on hold. Start writing for it again? Please? xD Oh, and perhaps more of Abel? His bitchass-ness is growing on me. Any way, awesome story. Please update soon?
heartfeltlove 2008-04-26 ch 7,	abuseI really liked this chapter! I'm just very dissapoinded she didn't tell Kane what happend with sebastion. And I have a feeling that sebastion is lying. And what she said in the last chapter about not putting up a fight when sebastion came next time, Wouldn't that be cheating on Kane?
heartfeltlove 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuseAww, That is so sweet! But did sebastion actually die? Just curious?
AMM3485 2008-04-11 ch 7,	abuseCrazy, I absolutely adore the sequel! I hope you update soon.
Llewellyne 2008-04-08 ch 7,	abuseGreat chapter! I love your story! Update soon !! :)
New reader! :) (Amy) 2008-04-02 ch 7, anon.	abuseI really loved Bloodlust and I stayed up for hours on end reading it! It was awesome, so I decided to check out the sequel! Your story reminds me a bit of Stephanie Meyer's Twilight series a lot, especially some of the vampire descriptions. Anyway ._. a question's been pluckin' at my brain for a while and I wanted to ask... Why isn't Sebastian dead? I mean, I know why, but how come Kane didn't actually kill him? Like rip his head off near the last chapters of Bloodlust? :x It never made sense to me how even though a Born vampire is supposed to be much stronger and way more powerful...they seemed like they were both on an equal footing during the fight scenes. I cannot comprehend that part because his family was pretty relaxed when they said they were going to go kill some mental vampire, and yet they didn't. And now...he is in Soulless. I must say, Sebastian is a scary bastard in this story (and Bloodlust too! Hell...) Reading any scene with him in it just pisses me off so much (esp those touchy touchy Fiona scenes...they make me squirm, even though I'll be 19 in May -_-;;)! So I'm glad he's a work of fiction because if a person like him ever existed...goodness gracious, I'd keel over. And Fiona seems less like herself. Maybe that is how you planned it to be since she's a vampire now? But her getting raped and not having told Kane is upsetting. She should tell, no matter what he does to Sebastian. I don't understand what's holding her back. Sure Kane will be hurt but it's better to tell the truth. That...and Sebastian would die in the hands of Kane! ^^;; Kane on the other hand seems to have retained his old self from Bloodlust :) I love this character. He's so loyal and sweet that it's a shame that he's a fictional character, haha. But you know... your description somehow reminded me of Harry Potter, just because he had green eyes O_O; (Sebastian reminded me of...Malfoy. Creepy. shudders) Also, Fiona seems insecure to me with the whole I-want-my-soul-back ordeal. I mean, I understand what she's feeling but still. Kane's reassurance doesn't rub off on her one bit. It's sad. I think I might get annoyed with her if she keeps lying to Kane. T_T I hope she tells him! And I think Abel is secretly jealous of Kane! :x Haha...a horribly cheesy notion but still...it's fun to think so! Oh oh, and I love the brothers! Paul and Jesse are awesome. I wish I had older brothers like that. They act like five-year-olds when they fight it's hilarious! Keep it up :D! I'll be a regular reviewer, haha. Hm...I should make an account now! Off I go
Addicted. 2008-03-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou're stories have me HOOKED! I should be studying to kick some nerdy ass, but instead i find myself reading most of your stories. You're gonna be the death of me. Btw, the pics you put up were kindda what I had in mind. Which hasn't actually happened with another fictionpress sotry before. So either we were twins in the past life or you're description was two thumbs up. It's probably the later. Sitting on the edge of my seat to hear from you soon. SO UPDATE! P.S. Please tell me Fiona can't be pregnant. I mean her vomitting...my mind wondered. Because having a child with SeBASTARD? not even a fictional character should have to go through that.
atreyu love 2008-01-05 ch 7,	abusei love! but i still think that Fiona's stupid. shes risking SO much for her soul. when i really dont think its going to do anything even if she gets it back, just let her taste food and go out in the sun, though i could def. understand those two reasons. lol PLEASE UPDATE!
atreyu love 2008-01-05 ch 2,	abusei think shes stupid :(
starsfinallyxplode 2007-12-21 ch 7,	abuseNot a bad start. I don't know how the original beginning was, but the first five chapters as they stand now explain why Fiona wants her soul. It does seem, however, that Fiona has this idea that getting her soul back will mean she's human again, when in actuality, she'll be even less human (aren't Born vampires supposed to have to drink more blood and have even more limited emotions than regular ones?) I also can't believe how badly she's treating Kane. I don't completely understand why she's lying to him about everything. Is it that if she tells him what happened, he'll kill her one source of information about necromancers? It might be nice if you could more explicitly state her reasons behind keeping Kane in the dark, becuase I think it's a little unclear. Also, doesn't Kane suspect anything? He saw that there was blood all over her room, but believed her when she said Sebastion just kissed her? Unless he's planning on confronting her later, I don't get it.
Faith Adeline 2007-12-15 ch 7,	abuseGood new chapter, I loved her and Abel playing scrabble. Too funny. I just hope she tells him soon what really happened. Keep up the wonderful work and update as soon as you can. Faith
midnightbeauty 2007-12-15 ch 7,	abuseHeh I like this chapter :) It's nice to read about Fiona and Abel actually getting along :) Well, update soon! Kisses, midnightbeauty
urbanfictionalist 2007-12-15 ch 7,	abusei enjoyed it as always although i was confused at the begginig unti i read more into it and realized it was only a dream but i liked it none the less

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