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| felicia13 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was extremely powerful and I could feel every word like you were saying it to me. The last sentences are amazing and deserve to be hung on a wall somewhere or magnet-clipped to the refridgerator. And I mean that. Beautifully written, this gets the point across in surprisingly few words. Felicia. |
| rust phoenix 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting start. Your descriptions are very effective and your writing style is quite absorbing. I look forward to reading more. |