Wow. That was extremely powerful and I could feel every word like you were saying it to me.

The last sentences are amazing and deserve to be hung on a wall somewhere or magnet-clipped to the refridgerator. And I mean that.

Beautifully written, this gets the point across in surprisingly few words.

Felicia.

Very interesting start. Your descriptions are very effective and your writing style is quite absorbing. I look forward to reading more.