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Bloodfeeder94 2008-08-01 ch 1,	abusewow. I just wanted to say, You worte this prologue like you meant it. I coud feel the force of your words resounding through me, and it made me CARE about this character, about what had happened to him, and it made me curious about this other kid. I must say, this sounds like an amazing story. :K Bloodfeeder
SimplyxBecausex 2008-07-01 ch 24,	abuseI bawled my eyes out. Jake and Addison were so beautiful. Their love was so beautiful. And it broke my soul that people actually looked down on it. But it was so (unfortunately) true to life. Loved this story to death=)
persephone in waiting 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuseFor the record, I sent you a ridiculously long review after finishing your story, and then, naturally, when I clicked the "submit review" button, the entire page refreshed and my review was not sent. To sum it all up, your story was stunning, heart-wrenching, beautiful, and at times, even humorous. I whole-heartedly enjoyed it, and I wish you had more wonderful stories that I could read. It inspires me to write a slash fic of my own ... and it brought up several excellent points: Love doesn't need a label ["homosexual, heterosexual, etc."].. people can love each other without being gay, straight, or bi.. we all mourn equally.. love is liberating.. I could go on, but, I don't want to be "refreshed" again. Wonderful story.. it was so beautiful, my heart welled up [and I am NOT] an emotional person.. but, it didn't help that I was listening to depressing music, either.. Keep writing. ~Eve
Suigetsu 2008-06-01 ch 24,	abuseHey, So we get to the last chapter... and once again im finding myself enjoying every word. I'm glad you included Payton. And thanks again for writing a great story. ~Suigetsu
yuilhjk 2008-05-29 ch 24, anon.	abusethe ending didn't leave me happy or sad, just empty. if that was what you were trying for then good job, if not, well. that sucks.
WTF OMG STFU 2008-05-28 ch 24,	abuseaw. Darn you. I like happy endings. Even if that was...semi happy...Jake still died...gawsh. -cries- Loved the story though, your a great writer!!
kikiluu 2008-05-28 ch 24, anon.	abusewow this is one of the best stories I have read in a long time! You are a great author. I can't say I love the ending because I'm a fan of happy endings and I wish Jake hadn't died haha but I'm glad Addison moved on with his life. But what happened to Jake's dad? and Addison's friends we never really hear about them after a certain chapter and somethings get kind of vague. Cant wait to read the second draft!
narcissistic 2008-05-28 ch 24,	abusethats so sad. im glad he found the strength to pull through...omg i think im going to cry. no story has ever made me cry. this should be a movie...im serious. your really a great writer...you should write books or something. congragulations on finishing this story
slowlydancingtothestars 2008-05-28 ch 24,	abuseohh its was the perfect ending!
the-truth-is-verity 2008-05-28 ch 24,	abusewhat a perfect end to the story. i loved it so much i read it outloud to my brother. he didnt get it, and he couldnt understand why i was crying but that doesnt matter. this story is perfect all the way through. even though it doesnt happen the way you'd want it to, as a reader, with jake and addison being accepted by their parents and all that jazz. it still, really, is the best ending. not exactly sad, but not happy either. so, wow. thank you for a great read. and ill keep up with these extra bits you're gonna write.
Demi 2008-05-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm sorry but I have to say I really hate that ending. Normaly I ADORE your writing but the ending just didn't, well, I'm not sure how to explain it but I really hate it. ohwell.
Iizolda 2008-05-27 ch 24,	abuseEnding was beautiful. So hopeful:)
Ty Taco 2008-05-27 ch 24,	abuseWow. What an ending. He got married. To a freakin girl. And the country is still extremely bigoted. Great. lol I loved it. Thank you for writing it. xoxoxo, Ty
vimaro22 2008-05-27 ch 24,	abuseThat has to be one of the best, SADDEST stories I've ever read. Beautiful.
hollyjolly4u 2008-05-26 ch 22, anon.	abusethis was as always amazing i really wish i could write like you.just the little details that you write without even thinking about it really just make it all the more realistic, its good to find an author who writes realistically! im still mad about the whole death thing and im gonna be honest im not sure where its goigng since the chapters are shorter now, i hope that the ending isnt sad though :] is he gonna meet somebody? oh and i reall like rob's character even more for some reason, hes just reallt attractive in his own way.

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