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Reviews For: Up Against A Wall

The Phoenix of Dumbledore
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseI really liked you story, but in line like 19 or somethings "Take my skin in you", I think you want "Take my skin in your".
XxPerfect ImperfectionxX
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseIntence and sexual. I like.
Sophie Ulquiorra Allen
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseDelightfully sexy! I love the imagery here, although there are a few spelling errors that you could go back and fix (but none that detract from the meaning).
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