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| The Phoenix of Dumbledore 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI really liked you story, but in line like 19 or somethings "Take my skin in you", I think you want "Take my skin in your". |
| XxPerfect ImperfectionxX 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseIntence and sexual. I like. |
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseDelightfully sexy! I love the imagery here, although there are a few spelling errors that you could go back and fix (but none that detract from the meaning). |