this really doesnt have any poetic merit to it. it might as wel be an advertizement for the book of mormon. you are free to be a mormon if you wish, but write something more than a brief description of the book. how does it make you feel? how has it changed your life? why is it so special? what does that mean to me?

Are you Mormon? Or as also known as Latter-Day Saints Either that or you're very respective to other peoples' religion. This is usually not come across in religious poems and I'm very impressed. Most of the time religious stories/poems are used to portray their religion as if "oh my religion is so much better than yours that I want to tell the world" but yours isn't used in a cocky way. Very impressive.
(P.S: I'm LDS...)

.:K.C:.