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painting andromeda 2007-10-15 . chapter 1
But a music note slipping from my fingers rain acid
And mermaids laugh a song of lies but their eyes
Woven with seaweed will always speak truth
And my truth is I'm a ship without a lighthouse


Perfection. Never stop writing. This is flawless.


Yours in writing,
Stephen
burning in effigy 2007-10-14 . chapter 1
oh ** goodness.
i love your poems.

they can be so heartbreaking and beautiful
(it's like the story of many unfolding)

i want to quote part of each stanza.. but that would make this review ridiculous long

just..
brilliant job.
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