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RogueRobin
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseIs this a story, or your feelings personified? It's good to see you again by the way. I wasn't sure where you had gotten to.
the face in the window
2007-10-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is really well writen, as always, but I wish you capitalized. (PET PEEVE xD)

Rowan.
Euglena
2007-10-21
ch 1,
abuseI really like this, especially the ending(last line in particular.)
Thanks for reviewing my first poem!

-Euglena
Heart Devoted
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseVery well written, although capitalization could have been better. I like the way it flows, but the first paragraph should probably have shorter or easier to read sentances; I had to read through it twice to get the meaning.
Other than that it was very nice and I feel yearning to know the story behind the emotion. Good work.
Twilight Starr
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseGood poem.

You really should capitalize your 'i's. It would make your story look so much better.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life.

Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~
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