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| RogueRobin 2008-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseIs this a story, or your feelings personified? It's good to see you again by the way. I wasn't sure where you had gotten to. |
| the face in the window 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is really well writen, as always, but I wish you capitalized. (PET PEEVE xD) Rowan. |
| Euglena 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, especially the ending(last line in particular.) Thanks for reviewing my first poem! -Euglena |
| Heart Devoted 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, although capitalization could have been better. I like the way it flows, but the first paragraph should probably have shorter or easier to read sentances; I had to read through it twice to get the meaning. Other than that it was very nice and I feel yearning to know the story behind the emotion. Good work. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. You really should capitalize your 'i's. It would make your story look so much better. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |