Is this a story, or your feelings personified? It's good to see you again by the way. I wasn't sure where you had gotten to.

This is really well writen, as always, but I wish you capitalized. (PET PEEVE xD)

Rowan.

I really like this, especially the ending(last line in particular.)
Thanks for reviewing my first poem!

-Euglena

Very well written, although capitalization could have been better. I like the way it flows, but the first paragraph should probably have shorter or easier to read sentances; I had to read through it twice to get the meaning.
Other than that it was very nice and I feel yearning to know the story behind the emotion. Good work.

Good poem.

You really should capitalize your 'i's. It would make your story look so much better.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life.

Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~