 RogueRobin 2008-02-11 . chapter 1Is this a story, or your feelings personified? It's good to see you again by the way. I wasn't sure where you had gotten to. |
 the face in the window 2007-10-22 . chapter 1This is really well writen, as always, but I wish you capitalized. (PET PEEVE xD)
Rowan. |
 Euglena 2007-10-21 . chapter 1I really like this, especially the ending(last line in particular.)
Thanks for reviewing my first poem!
-Euglena |
 Heart Devoted 2007-10-14 . chapter 1Very well written, although capitalization could have been better. I like the way it flows, but the first paragraph should probably have shorter or easier to read sentances; I had to read through it twice to get the meaning.
Other than that it was very nice and I feel yearning to know the story behind the emotion. Good work. |
 Twilight Starr 2007-10-14 . chapter 1Good poem.
You really should capitalize your 'i's. It would make your story look so much better.
Good luck with writing, this story, and life.
Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~ |