Pretty good... awful short... but (after looking at your profile), probably the longest thing you've EVER done, eh? :)

That's okay, though. One of these days you'll find that all these little 200 word ideas in your poems/one-shots will coagulate into the story you REALLY want to tell. You're young. You got time. :) again.

Bittersweet! Really love'd it.

Lovely :] It was lovely.