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jq1790 2007-10-15 . chapter 1
It's just you, I think. It makes perfect sense if one knows what to look for. Plus, since I know you, that helps, too.
Sexy Vampirechick 2007-10-14 . chapter 1
It does make sense.It's like your friend knows you like him,but he pretending he doesn't know.

And yeah..you had that grammar mistake "than" should be "then".
sweets555 2007-10-14 . chapter 1
i think it makes sense
you like him, but hes being stupid and thinking you dont
right?
you used than instead of then
and if u want advice, all i can tell you is that if you dont try itll hurt even more than if u try and get rejected
it sounds backwards, but its true.
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