|Reviews for Secret, It Was All Hidden|
| Jonathan Campbell 10/21/07 . chapter 1
I love this poem, i'm not sure what it is. It's so much like an e e cummings poem (he is my favorite). I like to emulate him a little in my writing. You have beautifully captured everything that you set out to. Simply Marvelous.
p.s. thank you for the comment, i would love for you to read more.
| purplepants 10/15/07 . chapter 1
i really love all of the descriptions and the image and feeling combined is really powerful, though confusing at first. great job.