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| molotovcocktailontherocks 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful overall, great imagery and you've got mad writing skillz, good job! |
| the face in the window 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseHi Ashelin. Just wanted to make sure you knew that I moved to this account. I'll post stuff on here as soon as those annoying four days are over. Rowan. |
| TylerB 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseHas anyone ever told you that you have a way with words? Funny but I took more out of these 30 words than most people's 200-word drawn out poetry. |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. I love every line and the ending is perfect. Rowan. |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Simply lovely writing. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| fairytale failure 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the depth and complexity of this poem - I'm not sure if you meant it to be that way, but there are just so many different thoughts here in 5 lines. I think my favourite of your writing for a while. |
| painting andromeda 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseWoven together like other people’s dreams That line will forever echo in my mind. This is haunting. Eloquent and refreshing. The concept of yearning and lost loves. Thank you for this. Always, Stephen |
| Infinite Smiles 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous imagery! I love it. |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI love the theme in this poem, as well as the word choice. Everybody has their own secrets, and they will inevitably end up hurting someone we care about, even if all we want to do is protect them. I really am impressed by the word choice in this poem, though, so visual. Peace, Daze |