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| Radyn 2008-05-17 ch 1,  | abuseI always think that the best pieces of writing are ones that aren't too direct, and leave the reader with a niggling sense of uncertainty and unease. This has got to be one of them. I can't exactly tell what you're writing about, but I like the kind of atmosphere that you've created and the simultaneously mundane and important moments that you've depicted. It works for me. |