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nikki! :D 2007-10-16 . chapter 1
addict ka pa rin ba sa kanya? ;)wooh!
squiggle-line 2007-10-15 . chapter 1
Yay, drabble!

Both sentences in the second paragraph are awkwardly worded.

"And her smile...which [reflected] pure grace and innocence..." You shift to present tense suddenly.

The wording is a bit dense. I like the flowery language but the flow is bumpy.
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