| Reviews for Ungrateful Dead |
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simpleplan13 2/14/08 . chapter 1interesting... I like it a lot.. it makes a really great point and I love the phrase "ungrateful dead".. One thing the two lines and the world around them dies/and the ungrateful dead.. I wouldnt use and to start both lines it seemed a bit repetitive...other than that really great piece |
blueroseofice 10/28/07 . chapter 1I like the format of this poem and the flow of it. Also nothing is to political if its the truth. Maybe if politicians were actually truthful there wouldn't be a need for this poem. I really like it! Never stop writting! EM |
hiro0911 10/26/07 . chapter 1children fighting wars and the world around them dies - i liked this line in particular |
Sexy Vampirechick 10/16/07 . chapter 1Sounds like a song.I like your contrasts in the poem,it's cool,yet well done. |