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| simpleplan13 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI like the last line a lot.. the whole piece is powerful and true and makes a great point.. awesome piece |
| Ryguy7 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseWow, excellent job..all your points are very true. Sometimes it's hard to comprehend the totality of the disaster that goes on in places like Rwanda and Afghanistan..but our ignorance is whats causing the distruction. You've definitely got a gift for writing and I hope you continue to write as its clear you really enjoy it and its also something you're very good at! |