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| Moondog Dozier 2007-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseI like the complexity of the situation described. It deals with true concerns and the real emotional issues of what people truly think about. The feelings hang heavy in this one. They are readily apparent to the reader by the repetition toward the end. Well written and thought provoking. MD:77. |