Bloody brilliant series of connections. I love how you made sure everything flowed from one character to the other, and made absolutely sure the voices for each were different. The only tip I could think to give would eb to even out the characters a little? But then it might stop the lfow of the story a little, I bet, so... Gosh, I dunno. xD I like how you started their names with P too. xD Symbolism ftw! ;D Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

I enjoyed the dark humor of this piece. Giving the characters their own idiosyncracies is a great thing. But while I liked the shifting characters, it was a bit hard to follow for two reasons: One, I hadn't met the characters before they appear in their own paragraphs, and I had to go back to the paragraph before to make sure I was reading about a different person. But the real problem is, two, all of their names start with "P." If you wanted to leave the character shift the way it is, try giving the characters completely different names so they don't bumble together. But the story was amusing.