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explosion of planes
2007-10-18
ch 1,
abusethis is great
i love it
--just wow
Crossing the Rubicon
2007-10-15
ch 1,
abuseI love this poem. The end of itactually made me shiver because I can totally relate. That line "sleeping late and waking late and living late" was genius. The whole flow of it was wonderful. This is definitely going on my favorites.
Ashelin
2007-10-15
ch 1,
abuseOur lives can feel so trivial at times. I liked this. The contrasts of then and now, but how they are somehow similar. Great job.
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