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brwneyedgrl 2008-10-01 ch 23,	abuseOk so I have not had time for a life let alone reading amazing material like this. I finally had time to catch up on your story and read 2 chapters in between my classes and got so sucked in I sat in class and finished reading your last 3 chapters on my phone. This is the best original story I have ever read online. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. I hope Amery lives, but life is a bitch that likes to feed you shit when you really want a cookie. You are a great writer and this is a great story and when (I don't say if because I know this is publish able) I will totally buy it and tell every one I read the original. Ok I know,super long review but I haven't read this in forever and I am on my second coffee. Well just wanted to let you know I love it!
Mayuka 2008-10-01 ch 23,	abuseOH NOES! Please update soon!
MamiPapi 2008-10-01 ch 23,	abuseNO! so what's gonna happen now!! I dont want amery to die!
Euphorialie 2008-09-30 ch 23,	abuseAngst! How could Amery go and get his heart ripped out? Although, as far as deaths go, that's a pretty impressive one. If you gotta go out, might as well do it in style. But I haven't given up hope. Somehow, Amery's going to be risen from the dead, probably by that guy he sold his soul to. And everything's going to be great. Anyways, my favorite part of this chapter was when Amery said he liked that she fought bloody. I chuckled. I also liked that she burned Caine's heart out of his chest. Tight. Awesome chapter and epic duel to the death (-cries-). I hope Amery finds some way to claw out of the depths of hell.
Belle Morte858 2008-09-30 ch 23,	abuseOMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! NO he cant be dead! agh!! lol jk I cant wait to read the next chapter please update asap!
Euphorialie 2008-09-18 ch 22,	abuseWhere was my freakin alert? Blegh. Anyways, WTF!? AMERY SOLD HIS SOUL! Well, sorta. But-just-why-no! This was a great intensity builder before the huge fight scene. I'M certainly hyped up. Though I'm a little suspicious about this Jack character...maybe he's going to betray them. Or already has. That would be diabolical. But I'm very upset that Amery may possibly die to save Sam. That would just be plain depressing. Though he does sort of need to hurry up with the saving, since Sam is about to duke it out with Caine. So basically I can't wait for this huge epic fight, then after that, when Amery HOPEFULLY swindles his way out of this deal with Azule. Cause he CAN'T die. I forbid it. :) So, to sum things up, amazing chapter.
Lucy-the-bookworm 2008-09-14 ch 22,	abuseThis is totally amazing. I was so into I didn't even realize that the time was going by! Awesome! Can't what for update!
Scorpiongurl324 2008-09-12 ch 22,	abuseGurl it was awesome as always. Update soon! -Kia
Belle Morte858 2008-09-04 ch 22,	abuseLoved it update again soon!
de6789 2008-08-12 ch 21,	abuselove it dearie. keep up the good work!
Belle Morte858 2008-08-08 ch 21,	abuseWOW! That was an amazing chapter please update again soon!
Status-Writing 2008-08-07 ch 21,	abuseOh, that was an amazing chapter! I love the way you've written it and I can't wait to read more. Gosh, Caine is so... urgh... I can't even think of a word. Rawr. (Lol.) So is his stupid right hand man. Lawl. Keep it up! [ Status ]
Euphorialie 2008-08-07 ch 21,	abuseWoah, kinky. That was definitely unexpected, though I guess it shouldn't have been since Caine and Clarisse were pretty much sex fiends from the get-go. This was sufficiently graphic for a one-on-one showdown of sorts between Sam and Caine, so great job with that. I can't wait for Amery to show up though...cause Sam's kind of screwed without him. And I just plain like Amery. So I definitely look forward to the next chapter! Keep it up!
Euphorialie 2008-07-24 ch 20,	abuseThe huge action duel was AWESOME! The first showdown was...was so entirely tightlicious that I can't even think of a way to compliment it. I sort of felt sorry for Caine though, cause he lost Clarisse. Which I probably shouldn't, but hey, I sympathize with the needlessly violent. I feel sorry for Amery too, cause everyone's hating on him for losing Sam. I mean, come on guys, it wasn't entirely his fault. Anyway, PERFECT chapter. Can't wait to meet this Azule character that everyone's so afraid of and figure out how he's supposed to help fix this mess.
Scorpiongurl324 2008-07-21 ch 20,	abuseKK, I'm a lil confused who is this Azule? Loved it! Update Soon and I would so buy the published version! -Kia

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