It such a shame to see so many of my favorite authors on this site take down their work because of the plagerism issue. I sincerely hope you get published, you have the talent for sure :] I enjoyed reading your work while it was posted.

oh love this story man

I really loved this story. The characters were great and very well developed. It was an amazing read, and I'm willing to pay your muses whatever they want so you can write the sequel. Keep writing!

Awesome story!! i read it all cause i could stop - even though i have finals next week... oh well!!

anyway i cant wait for the sequel! and i hope that comes out soon!

loved the story and the characters. I hope Many and Gwen get back together and Efrain makes another appearance. Loved the main couple and loved the way this story ended.

:D loves From the Ashes and post the sequel asap!

I really enjoyed this story and it inspired me to make an account on fp.
There was only one thing that bothered me, which was commas missing just before names etc.
Other than that a great story.

This is an amazing story! And I can't wait for teh sequel.

I wanted to give as complete a comment(s) as possible, given that I read the entire novel in one sitting. I still don’t think I’m finished. Some minor nits regarding dialog grammar, and I’m tempted to go over them myself then send it back if you’d like me to. As far as the storytelling goes, it’s really masterful. There’s nothing I’d change, if I’d written it. And that’s with a somewhat obscure understanding of the action, given that, again, I read it all in one sitting. I still feel I should do you justice. Save a whole night for this one work alone.

First off, in dialog, there’s always a comma preceding the name of the person addressed. Also question marks on what are in reality questions. Also end quote, comma, then smaller case 3rd person pronoun (not the original text; my suggestions):

“I cannot protect them all, Amery”

“Are you actually conversing politely with a vampire, Sam?"

"Why don't you and some men go to New York to properly dispose of Lenore, instead of sending men who'll likely fail?"

"Can you heal this?" she asked

Missing word: She managed to chuckle through her tears and said, "You were going to say monster INSTEAD of vampire, weren't you?"

un-controllable (no hyphen: uncontrollable)

"Um, aren't you all friends?"

"Tell me what happened," she stated.

"Shite, (rather, “shit”)" he cursed, sitting up.

Open your mind, a voice suddenly said.

First sign of bad times a' coming and I run like a fucking three year old. (rather, as a noun, hyphenated: three-year-old)

"No, dad, (as a proper noun, should be capitalized: “Dad”) I'm not. The prophecy-"

"Adams, you better now (not?) die on me."

"Fellow human support (comma here) eh?" She (smaller case “s”) teased.

"Nevermind” (rather, “Never mind.”)

but he isn't the Saint you think him to be (if not a particular saint by name, should be smaller case)

No, you're being over-protective (overprotective, more common usage gradually does away with hyphenation over time)

“We could try all sorts of torture out on her, she'd last a long time." Yes. Torture her.

"The stomach in our acid changes when we turn.” (Think you mean “the acid in our stomach.”)

"Don't you. . .aren't you worried any feelings you have, or had, will get in the way?” (Nice limitation to her strength, a vulnerability that makes Sam such an interesting character).

Sam being considered weak because she’s mortal and a female. (Yeah, right. This is age of the kick-ass babe, readers. Strong + yet in some ways vulnerable = sexy.)

"Jesus, I need a drink." (The Founder of Christianity a bartender. Interesting twist. Naw, just messin’ with ya.)

"You know it's good magic if it tastes horrible." “Taste bad, heal good, Danielsan” – Mr. Myagi from the Karate Kid. “Just a spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down.” – Mary (Fucking) Poppins.

Chapter 20, the torture scene. What sort of torture devices? Don’t be abstract, let me see them through your mind’s eye. Whips, of course, and an iron maiden, thumbscrew, cuckold, what specifically?

Azule smiled, showing off his shark like teeth. "You know, curiosity killed the cat." / "And satisfaction brought it back," Caine replied easily. "Why do you want him?" -- and just where’d you get THIS from, Faith? LOL.

i like this storie :)

Dude, its her magic comming out!!

yah there will be a sequal!
u did a really good job on this story
i can' t wait for the sequal

Oh my, what an amazing epilogue ^^ Short and absolutely perfect :D I really don't know what more to say :D

I love this story and Im eagerly awaiting the sequel ^^

i think azule wants more than amery's soul if ya know what i mean ; )

Oh a cliffhanger, great by the way!

Lucy

OMG OMG OMG so Caine didn't die well that sux and wat will happen to Sam and Amery, it sux! Well awesome ending and can't wait to read the sequel!

Ooh, that's not good. I didn't realize that she didn't kill Caine the second time around. Nice setup for a sequel there, or even just leaving it like that is cool. Very suspenseful. And I was wondering why Azule hadn't shown up again, but you had it covered. :) Anyways, great job. I bet it feels good to have this finished, especially with how wonderful it turned out. I look forward to your next work. :)