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excerpts from a summer
kelsi bones
2007-10-19 . chapter 6
This is an amazing collection. A lot of my stuff ends up like this, in little snippets of brilliance, but i never actually post them. If mine are ever as amazing and beautiful as yours, maybe i will =]
k.X
burning in effigy
2007-10-15 . chapter 5
pretty much excellent so far
(this one will probably be my favorite)
like the mood shift in the last line, a bit of a twist
burning in effigy
2007-10-15 . chapter 4
last line made me smile
the simplicity of these 'excerpts' so far are refreshing
burning in effigy
2007-10-15 . chapter 1
hmm.. i like the openended-ness of the snippet
reminds me of a scrapbook :)
perdita's kiss
2007-10-15 . chapter 6
o
this is
everything
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