brilliant imagery. the lack of punctuation works here and there, but in some places it confuses me. great anyhow, your style is beautiful.

harsh but true in so many ways. i think i get it but its all about prespective.

Hey nice to see you posting poetry again. Another gem here of course. And God do I hate voicemails of blondes screaming... :)

this is ... absolutely gorgeous. ** brilliant. beautiful. amazing. the imagery is flawless -- incredible.

"everytime I bleed
there are voicemailes
of blondes screaming..."

extremely vivid imagery here. I really admire that in writing. If I can see what you're saying, you've written something worth reading. Good job ^_^.