Another great piece. The theme behind this was great, you bought up ideas that Ive actually never read of beforee. Well an idea, and you phrased it so well!

I love how you ended with "because my dear/ love is a four letter lie"

another one to add to my favorites. you're REALLY good at writing. keep it up!

Nice work here. One would think that I would agree with the concept behind this piece but I don't. But besides that fact, you did a nice job. Keep it up. :)

~Arafax~

I like this a lot... The message is touching and so very true... =D I like this a lot... =D

I don't remember if I've ever reviewed any of yours but I know you've reviewed mine so I figured I should return the favor!

I love this poem, in it's entirety. The rhythm is not purely defined but I like your style. I love the last three lines:
"Don't blame yourself for being so blind / Because my dear / Love is a four letter lie"

It says it all; it's the reason I'll be adding this to my favorites. =]

-STIX-

hi,

my favorite sentence is "And how one night she lost herself

The crime of passion was committed" the poem is good.

This poem was so sad, but good.

Thanks for your reviews of my story "Fayth Required". I really appreciate it!

Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

oohh
very dramatic, but i like it that way.
great job!!

A little simple, but still nicely written. Very nice.

Love,
~Dia