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| about.us. 2008-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseI love how you ended with "because my dear/ love is a four letter lie" |
| i.am.pockets 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseanother one to add to my favorites. you're REALLY good at writing. keep it up! |
| Arafax 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseNice work here. One would think that I would agree with the concept behind this piece but I don't. But besides that fact, you did a nice job. Keep it up. :) ~Arafax~ |
| Silver-winged Phoenix 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot... The message is touching and so very true... =D I like this a lot... =D |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI don't remember if I've ever reviewed any of yours but I know you've reviewed mine so I figured I should return the favor! I love this poem, in it's entirety. The rhythm is not purely defined but I like your style. I love the last three lines: "Don't blame yourself for being so blind / Because my dear / Love is a four letter lie" It says it all; it's the reason I'll be adding this to my favorites. =] -STIX- |
| kloun doll 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abusehi, my favorite sentence is "And how one night she lost herself The crime of passion was committed" the poem is good. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseThis poem was so sad, but good. Thanks for your reviews of my story "Fayth Required". I really appreciate it! Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| sweets555 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseoohh very dramatic, but i like it that way. great job!! |
| DiaRose 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseA little simple, but still nicely written. Very nice. Love, ~Dia |