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| Isabella22 2008-05-09 ch 12,  | abuseLOL! I could feel the heat radiating off that kiss from just reading it! I'm looking forward to more of those ;) Great chap! Marvin cracks me up! Update pronto! |
| Tempra 2008-04-20 ch 12, | abuseStumbled on your story today. D: * Awesome! and funny. Want...more...more...more! Don't make me beg! Fine... /beg. |
| Isabella22 2008-03-15 ch 11, | abuseLOL! That was hilarious! :D he told her to babble, how cute update soon! |
| October and December 2008-03-06 ch 10, | abusecute emotional and cute! ~December |
| Isabella22 2008-03-03 ch 10, | abuseaww they're so cute! i want another scene like the one when the electricity went out! update soon, too! |
| Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-02-29 ch 10, | abuseI finally finished reading it! X3 I thought it was cute, very cuute! FINALLY! Jace asked her out, 'bout time! I can't wait for the next chapter. I know it'll be just as awesome as this one! |
| Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-02-18 ch 9, | abuseWoohoo! He actually asked her out! Can't wait to read more! =D |
| Isabella22 2008-02-12 ch 9, | abuseLOL! YAY! He asked her out! I'm so happy! I loved the tender moment between them. It was so sweet. Update really soon. |
| October and December 2008-02-08 ch 8, | abuseaw drat! i wanted them to kiss. but i guess it's still a little too early. but you gotta update so do it now! |
| Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-02-05 ch 8, | abuseACK! Thina! Right when things were getting hot and heavy! That's it, I'm, coming into the story and beating Thina. Write more! |
| Isabella22 2008-02-03 ch 8, | abuseUpdate soon! Yeah! Lol, Jace is a studmuffin! |
| Twinkle Star Bell 2008-02-03 ch 8, | abuseA little too fast for a kiss but the hug thing before the kiss wasn't too fast...I hope that made sense. Anyway this story is quite good and I hope that your next update doesn't take too long! |
| wild-dog-16 2008-01-18 ch 7, | abuseSorry I haven't reviewed in a while. ^^;; This chapter was coolz. Haha, I can just se Jace's face now! Update soon! |
| October and December 2008-01-12 ch 7, | abuseOh wow, Ebony was a bit freaky wasn't she? I'm glad her and her sister finally made up! Update so I can see what happens next in this gir's life. ;) |
| Little Miss Whatsherface 2008-01-07 ch 7, | abuseAw, poor Ebony. She had to go and ramble in front of the hot guy. Hopefully things turn out better for her! :D |