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| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-21 ch 23,  | abuseI wish Ally could have given me Robby. :P This is such a sweet ending, especially the last sentence. Lol. Awesome job, as always :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI swear I'm making it a mission to finish your entire series before next week. Lol. Seeing as how I read Phone Calls and the sequel(s) some time last year, I forgot a bit of the story but you did a pretty good job of recapping. :) |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseso you probably won't reply to this in time and i'll probably be done with the story, but is Ally and Jamie in college or what im so confused |
| wooshh 2008-06-10 ch 23, anon. | abuse"This isn’t like my first three semesters where we had to get the boring stuff out of the way.” impossible to have three semesters! at least i think so. you can only have two semesters in a year. but if you want three, then the word you're lookin for is TRImester. you know, semi for two tri for three. then it's four quarters. hahah. so yeah |
| wooshh 2008-06-10 ch 14, anon. | abuseuh, i don't know if you know this but it gets pretty damn cold in california during winter too. the sun isn't always out. |
| Lanna 2008-05-16 ch 20, anon. | abuseyay! there over! call me robby baby ;] |
| bookwrm 2008-04-25 ch 23, | abuseI can now safely say I am addicted to your stories. Another great one!! I really liked Robby though (not as much as Cole :D), so it was a bittersweet read this time. |
| waiting4haykin 2008-04-23 ch 4, anon. | abuseI'm too lazy to log in right now, but I wanted to point out a line that I feel in love with: "His blue eyes sparkled and she wondered how many hearts he’d broken." This is kind of random, but it would make a beautiful haiku (something that I've been writing a lot lately): His blue eyes sparkled And she wondered how many Hearts he had broken. I know that this is random, but I saw it and thought that it was a cool coincidence. |
| Oblivious.Only.To.You 2008-04-14 ch 23, | abuse*shrieks.* SO KAWAII omg. hearts story. |
| AMM3485 2008-04-02 ch 23, | abuseThis one was great! Loved the four of them in this one! |
| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-04-01 ch 23, | abusenice! cole and ally had a happy ending. jamie's next i guess? |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-03-29 ch 23, | abuseawesoem story =] ahha its adorable(; but Iz&Jake's love story is better in my oppinionx) |
| .J0ana. 2008-03-27 ch 23, | abuseAW!! that was awesome! I wanted them together all along! You are so good at writing stories and comming up with stories. How do you come up with these thing? They are so filled with drama, it kills not knowing whats next. Anyways, that was great! |
| Not Mary Jane 2008-03-10 ch 23, | abuseThis is SO cool. I like the ending, so sweet... One epilogue is so not enough here. LOL. |
| Rae of Light 2008-02-08 ch 2, | abusecan't wait to read more!! |